As per usual for Mpv's videos, the acting feels extremely forced and unrealistic. You could tell that they were actors playing a lesbian couple having sex. A good actor draws you in with their performance, and makes you believe that they Are that character. I can tell they're working hard, but the performances really need a lot of work. The script was okay, but there were some cringy lines here and there. Further, as usual with this creator's films, you can tell that the pool they were standing in was only waist-deep, and that they were "sinking" by bending their knees down. Now, I understand that it's very hard to simulate this kind of thing, but at the same time, they could have tried a little harder. I'm also not a big fan of scenes where the characters pretend to drown. Terror isn't sexy, and neither is drowning. Moreover, if they're going to have a scene where the substance they're immersed in is only waist-deep, don't pretend like it's more than that. If you're limited in the kind of set assets you have access to, then work within your limits. You could have a really sexy scene with two girls in a pit of mud, without pretending that it's this "bottomless pit of quicksand." And if you're going to go that route, then go all in: work hard to make it convincing, instead of using improper tools for the job, trying to cover it up with inadequate acting, and hoping that the viewer doesn't notice. My biggest qualm is the price. Mpv's videos, considering how mediocre the quality is, tend to cost Way more than other videos on UMD. Videos where the performers actually masturbate, or have sex, and they don't pretend that the substance they're using is something more than it's not. So, which would you prefer: a cheaper video of people actually enjoying themselves, or a more expensive video where people fake it?